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Suspended Sentence

by
John Cooper Clarke

Suspended Sentence

 read the paper humdrum
 what's the caper what goes on
 eat die ho hum
 page one some bum
 is giving a lunatic a loaded gun
 he walks others run
 thirty dead no fun
 do something destructive chum
 sit right down write a letter to the sun
 bring back hanging for everyone

 they took my advice they brought it back
 the national costume was all over black
 there were corpses in the avenues and cul-de-sacs
 piled up neatly in six-man stacks
 hanging from the traffic lights and specially made racks
 they'd hang you for incontinence and fiddling your tax
 failure to hang yourself justified the axe
 deedley dee deedley dum
 they brought back hanging for everyone

 the novelty's gone it's hell
 the whole place is a death cell
 the bang bang bang of funeral bells
 those who aren't hanging are hanging someone else
 the people pay the paper sells
 death by the lorry load it smells
 swinging britain don't put me on
 they brought back hanging for everyone

-- John Cooper Clarke

[Questions for students]

-1-
In Suspended Sentence the poet uses a compressed form of language. Turn the following sentences into grammatical English by adding the words that have been left out.
a. ___ read the paper humdrum ___ what's the caper ___ what goes on.
b. ___ page one some bum is giving a lunatic a loaded gun.
c. He walks ___ others run.
d. Thirty ___ dead, ___ no fun.
e. ___ something destructive, chum.
f. ___ sit down and write a letter to The Sun, ___ that ___ bring back hanging for everyone.

-2-
Complete the sentences.
a. 'they took my advice'; by 'they' is meant ___.
b. 'the national costume was all over black'; it is black because ___.
c. The two methods of carrying out the death sentence are ___ and ___.
d. The line 'deedley dee deedley dum' indicates that the speaker is in a ___ mood.

-3-
In the third stanza the poet plays with the meaning of words.
a. 'the bang bang bang' is here the sound of the bells, but usually it is the sound of ___.
b. 'those who aren't hanging' can have two meanings. Which ones? Because of what follows it is clear that here it means ___.
c. 'the people pay' usually means that they give money in return for some article, but here it means ___.

-4-
The poet becomes very ironic in the third stanza. Find the lines in the poem of which the following statements are the interpretations.
a. All the corpses hanging by their necks may make the impression of a dance.
b. Hanging was all right when it first started.
c. Certain economic interests are served by all the hangings.

-5-
A suspended sentence is a sentence that is not carried out (for a certain period) even though a criminal has been convicted. Say whether the following statements are true or false.
a. The speaker realizes he made a mistake when he asked to bring back hanging.
b. The speaker is most guilty but his sentence has been suspended.
c. The poet is in favour of capital punishment under certain conditions.
d. The title of the poem also refers to the abolition of capital punishment in Britain.
e. The poet is critical of a certain type of newspaper.

[Assignments for students]

-1-
Form groups of three or four students and discuss the pros and cons of capital punishment. Write down three arguments for and three arguments against the death penalty. Each group reports back to the class after the discussion.

-2-
A commuted sentence is a sentence that is changed into a less severe sentence. In the following poem the convict asks for this change of sentence, but his request is remarkable. Read the poem.

The Commuted Sentence

 Shut me not alive away
 From the light of every day
 Hang me rather by the neck to die
 Against a morning sky.

 Oh shut me not behind a prison wall
 I have a horror of this sort of place
 Where I may sit and count the hours pass
 And never see a smiling human face.

 Here is all straight and narrow as a tomb
 Oh shut me not within a little room.

-- Stevie Smith

Which sentence is more severe, life imprisonment or death? Write down your thoughts in 190 to 210 words.